一、董宇辉进博会上说的英语原文：
You know China has long history and many talented writers and poets. Every children learn poems of Tang Dynasty when we in junior high or senior high. So if you communicate with Chinese people by poems, they will like it. This is a selected collection of poems, 300 Tang poems that make your heart soft. It is Chinese and English for better understanding. Wish you safe and happiness and healthy. And this one very famous. I heard that tomorrow is your birthday, so wish you happy birthday in advance.
二、语法错误拆解及标准修正
1. 定冠词缺失错误
- 错误点：“China has long history”
- 正确表达：China has a long history
2. 主语与名词单复数搭配错误
- 错误点：“Every children”。“Every”修饰可数名词单数，表“每一个”，“children”是复数，二者搭配逻辑矛盾。
- 正确表达：Every child
3. 主谓一致错误
- 错误点：“Every children learn”。主语修正为单数“Every child”后，谓语动词需用第三人称单数形式，原句“learn”为原形不符合规则。
- 正确表达：Every child learns
4. 介词与定冠词双重错误
- 错误点：“poems of Tang Dynasty”。
- 正确表达：poems from the Tang Dynasty
5. 从句成分残缺错误
- 错误点：“when we in junior high or senior high”。
- 正确表达：when they are in junior high or senior high
6. 名词与形容词混用错误
- 错误点：“Wish you safe and happiness and healthy”。“wish”后接形容词作宾语补足语，“happiness”是名词，需改为形容词形式“happy”，且并列形容词间用逗号优化表达。
- 正确表达：Wish you safe, happy and healthy
7. 句子谓语缺失错误
- 错误点：“And this one very famous”。该句缺少系动词，“very famous”作为表语需与系动词搭配，构成完整主系表结构。
- 正确表达：And this one is very famous
8. 固定搭配不规范错误
- 错误点：“wish you happy birthday”。可数名词短语“happy birthday”前需加不定冠词“a”。
- 正确表达：wish you a happy birthday in advance
#口语练习 #发音 #语法 #董宇辉 #进博会
You know China has long history and many talented writers and poets. Every children learn poems of Tang Dynasty when we in junior high or senior high. So if you communicate with Chinese people by poems, they will like it. This is a selected collection of poems, 300 Tang poems that make your heart soft. It is Chinese and English for better understanding. Wish you safe and happiness and healthy. And this one very famous. I heard that tomorrow is your birthday, so wish you happy birthday in advance.
二、语法错误拆解及标准修正
1. 定冠词缺失错误
- 错误点：“China has long history”
- 正确表达：China has a long history
2. 主语与名词单复数搭配错误
- 错误点：“Every children”。“Every”修饰可数名词单数，表“每一个”，“children”是复数，二者搭配逻辑矛盾。
- 正确表达：Every child
3. 主谓一致错误
- 错误点：“Every children learn”。主语修正为单数“Every child”后，谓语动词需用第三人称单数形式，原句“learn”为原形不符合规则。
- 正确表达：Every child learns
4. 介词与定冠词双重错误
- 错误点：“poems of Tang Dynasty”。
- 正确表达：poems from the Tang Dynasty
5. 从句成分残缺错误
- 错误点：“when we in junior high or senior high”。
- 正确表达：when they are in junior high or senior high
6. 名词与形容词混用错误
- 错误点：“Wish you safe and happiness and healthy”。“wish”后接形容词作宾语补足语，“happiness”是名词，需改为形容词形式“happy”，且并列形容词间用逗号优化表达。
- 正确表达：Wish you safe, happy and healthy
7. 句子谓语缺失错误
- 错误点：“And this one very famous”。该句缺少系动词，“very famous”作为表语需与系动词搭配，构成完整主系表结构。
- 正确表达：And this one is very famous
8. 固定搭配不规范错误
- 错误点：“wish you happy birthday”。可数名词短语“happy birthday”前需加不定冠词“a”。
- 正确表达：wish you a happy birthday in advance
#口语练习 #发音 #语法 #董宇辉 #进博会
